Eloc was a young, intelligent boy. Very young, actually. Eloc was only fourteen, but he considered himself to be more intelligent than most twenty-somethings.
Though he wanted to be a writer, he had several severe problems. For one, every time he began on a story, he would only work on it once before losing interest. He also seemed to always write first-person stories from his own perspective, using cheap tricks like naming the main character "Cole", clearly "Eloc" backwards.
Eloc also had an awful habit of always writing incredibly violent stories. While this was not too much of a problem, Eloc seemed incapable of writing anything non-violent. This was to satisfy his own dark craving for violence, as Eloc always based the main character on himself. Eloc, who had the habit of wearing nothing but black, was somewhat unhappy with how stereotypical this made him, as he did not believe everyone who wore black and listened to goth music was necesarrily a potential serial killer.
Eloc also tried to write poetry, though this always failed. Despite his problems, Eloc was a good prose-writer, but a poor poetry-writer.
Just like his violent stories, however, Eloc made attempts at writing meaningful poems to try to satisfy inner-cravings. Once, when he was thirteen, he wrote a love poem to an older girl named Jennifer and stuck it in her locker. Of course, with his psychopathic personality, he quickly became obsessed with this girl, and began writing dark, frightening letters that he put in her locker, smiling darkly at the thought of the fear she would feel when she found the letters. However, he knew he would never be able to actually date this girl, as she had a boyfriend; one who Eloc harbored a horrible jealousy and hatred for.
Her boyfriend, Darrel, happened to be an amazing poet, able to capture powerful emotion in his writings.
After spiraling into a dank depression, Eloc began to date Lucy, a friend of Jennifer's. Eloc harbored feelings for Lucy, but they weren't as nearly as great as his feelings for Jennifer. After getting to know Lucy, he realized how much he hated her, and dumped her. Lucy's threats towards Eloc did nothing but add to his hate towards her.
Lucy, unfortunately, was horribly ugly, and Eloc's relationship with her greatly damaged his social reputation. Originally, this was part of the reason Eloc dated her, as he expected her to have been shaped into an intelligent individual by the cruelty of others, when in reality it had simply caused her to degenerate into a socially-inept bitch. Eloc used his time spent with her to validate his inside belief that he wasn't shallow.
But, even more unfortunate was that Eloc was beginning to suspect that Jennifer was getting close to realizing that it was he who wrote the psychopathic love letters in which he described his horrible depression and his burning hatred for Darrel.
Fortunately, by the time Eloc dumped Lucy, Darrel and Jennifer had broken up. However, by that time, Jennifer had moved on to high school, and Eloc had to wait a year to see her again.
Maddened, Eloc fell into yeat another depression, eventually fell out of love with Jennifer, and fell in love with a goth girl he hadn't seen since she was attending his middle school two years ago. The girl, being two years older than Eloc, was in high school like Jennifer.
Eloc needed a person to obsess over, however, and he deemed none of the girls his age worthy. Once again proving his creepiness, however, Eloc decided to spend the rest of his final middle school year watching a sixth grader who happened to be the older goth girl's younger goth sister.
Still in a painful depression, Eloc began to reexamine his past to see just where he became so demented.
Eloc made sand pies in preschool by putting sand in a bowl. He then ate the sand.
Eloc convinced himself he was a werewolf in elementary school, and spent much of his time there telling other people he was one.
Eloc's parents were atheists who never spoke to Eloc about religion when he was little, and spent much of the beginning of his life believing in God, not knowing his parents did not. After years of being bullied in elementary school, Eloc lost faith. Afterwards, he gradually realized his parents were atheists. However, after losing belief in God, Eloc began to feel like he did not belong anywhere.
One of Eloc's teachers and a girl he knew in elementary school both died. He did not shed a tear for either one, but cried greatly when his pet rabbit died.
Despite admitting how flawed he is, however, Eloc is still incredibly egotistical, always considering himself the most intelligent person in the room, and valuing his own life far above anyone around him.
Maybe in time, Eloc will change for the better.
Or maybe he'll just lose it.







Devious Comments
Just might be my favorite quote in here.
Eloc is a pretty sweet name. I met a guy named Cole last night and he's WAY different than Eloc... haha.
So, what exactly was the point of this? Just random babble or what?
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